Sta.sh
A re-arranged soul
That has no more
Beautiful glow.
Only a dim flicker
As bright as a candle
Flame can make.
Will it get better?
I believe so, but
Who only really knows?
A heart so shattered
Beyond repair;
But I have no despair.
Does that mean I have
No emotion left to spare?
I smile in the thought
Of love and adoration
That I see these young
Couples display...
But only to imagine,
My true love is so many
Miles away.
So the re-arranged soul
And shattered heart work
Together to blind my mind.
Is it all a game?
Or is it really a love-
Dazed brain who's
Envious and Lustful over
The thought of you being
With her...?
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neither content or sad.
always alone, even though their not.
that fictional, yet physical barrier between them.
it stops all but a few, heart welcoming notes.
doomed to live a pitiful life, both of them dying,
of a loveless death.
soon they will grow detached,
and love another,
but they will forever
remember their loved one. . .
I believe you captured my idea of this poem perfectly
It does leave a lasting impression, compared to "such a beautiful work u.u" don't you think?
Maybe that's how i have so many page views in such short time XD
i think it's funny my brother, Tengu1000 (or was it TenGu1000? i forget)
has nearly 500-600 pageviews, but already has like 2 or 3k deviation views, while i dont even have 800 XD
to each his own *holds a glass of red liquid*
Cheers
fruit punch is tasty XD
when you add a drop of the blood of the damned >;D
So very true! >=}